The bells of St. Brigit’s are calling tonight
pealing, appealing,
across the sea.
I cannot go; I am not free
bound here in ministry.
Silence and sanctuary are calling tonight
softly, in stage whispers my soul cannot snub.
Slumbering amidst the restless din
I dream of holy hush and polished pews.
I yearn for my holy Father tonight
His presence palpable in the nave
I pine for Bibles with broken spines
spaces where I know God to be.
I rest, cradled in faith tonight
for the bells call but do not toll.
Grace covers; my debts are paid.
All is well with my soul.
This was a surprise prompt from Write on Edge: Add 100 words of fiction (any genre) to the following first line:
“The bells of St. Brigit’s are calling tonight.”
Andrea says
This is beautiful, Angie. It perfectly captures that line between peace and turmoil that I feel right before sleep.
Angie says
Thank you, Andrea. I got a great visual of a character when I read that opening line, and that peace and turmoil was central to it.
Jennifer says
Beautiful. The last part is my favorite.
Angie says
Mine, too.
Elaine A. says
I like to think I am covered in Grace. I know I need to be. Beautiful, Angie.
Angie says
I love the image of grace like a blanket. The ultimate gift from our Father. Oh, how I need it. Oh, how we *all* need it.
Kerstin @ Auer Life says
Touching and beautiful. The last line slayed me.
Angie says
I’m so glad you liked it, Kerstin. Thank you!
Elizabeth Yon says
Lovely!
Angie says
Thank you for reading!
Lyssa Medana says
I love the phrase ‘cradled in faith’. This is a lovely, comforting piece. LM x
Angie says
That’s one I struggled to find, but I love how it turned out. I was picturing him cradled in a hammock in this refugee camp, trying to find peace, and I realized what I was really looking for was right there in front of me in the image.
Lady Jennie says
This is really good. The story between the lines is good, the imagery in the poetry is good. I love it.
Angie says
Thank you, my dear!
Kathleen Basi says
Lovely–just lovely! It flows so nicely, and I love the tender, heartfelt tone.
Angie says
So glad you liked it!
Asproulla says
“Bibles with broken spines” I can see and feel them. Nice.
Angie says
So can I, Asproulla. It comforts me to know they’re out there all over the world.
Galit Breen says
You really stepped into that fiction, sister, and created a moment in time for *me* to step into… in a 100 words. Kudos.
Angie says
It pulled me in somehow. So glad you liked it, Galit!
Thomas Marlowe says
“Bound here in ministry…” Really powerful stuff this poem – Thank you
Cameron says
You are ever versatile, Angie. The cadence of this was like a lullaby.
Mandy says
So very lovely and powerful.
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